tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post5697496602508390316..comments2023-10-19T18:18:34.148+08:00Comments on room for Art on a blank page: Into The Vampire's Lair Chapter 9 [ with 2 different ending]Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-64566796169313673982011-04-01T07:16:30.039+08:002011-04-01T07:16:30.039+08:00An idea,
Use thread 2 but instead of having the da...An idea,<br />Use thread 2 but instead of having the dance and memory trouble have the announcement from thread 1<br /><br /><br />Dragonfire630 @ LiteroticaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-80184707938791824242011-03-31T10:18:52.608+08:002011-03-31T10:18:52.608+08:00Yes, please put Draven and Amber out of their mise...Yes, please put Draven and Amber out of their misery let them be together they will have other ups and downs that I am sure your list of " what kinda evil can I bring to these character to make thier life hell" list. First and formost is her memory and finding a way to refind the feelings that she had before she made Fi "kill them" away. I think I have cheesecake around here somewhere if that helps if not I got cookies!<br /><br />And to your sister for getting you to name a character in your story after her ~ That is AWSOME~ loltommyandcarriejameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13972261462946358587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-6412210823766441572011-03-30T23:08:10.027+08:002011-03-30T23:08:10.027+08:00Put them together at the ball. Have Aramis see wha...Put them together at the ball. Have Aramis see what happened to Amber and during their talk have him make her memories slowly return. Have Amber fall in love all over again. (I know that means rewriting the first part somewhat) Leave the hint about Dame Josephine towards the end and leave that as the cliff hanger for the next ch., if you havn't already.<br /><br />Maybe next series you can focus on Aramis and Josephine going back and forth with flasbacks?whiteboynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-25819031931210896742011-03-30T16:00:12.484+08:002011-03-30T16:00:12.484+08:00Lol willie! I'm still working on it and will p...Lol willie! I'm still working on it and will probably finalize everything over the weekend so... maybe by thursday/friday next week it should be up on Lit. =pArtFormhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17857732683304260226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-25236470168477271752011-03-30T15:49:08.090+08:002011-03-30T15:49:08.090+08:00now that I have posted a comment how long before w...now that I have posted a comment how long before we see the finished chapter soon please!williehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02121641615026995415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-4461555839309607782011-03-30T15:42:17.606+08:002011-03-30T15:42:17.606+08:00combine both but have her memory come back while d...combine both but have her memory come back while dancing with Draven. A definate NO to prolonging their suffering enough is enough. The deserve to be happy.williehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02121641615026995415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-76229682083643646632011-03-30T13:58:44.176+08:002011-03-30T13:58:44.176+08:00I think you should end their suffering while setti...I think you should end their suffering while setting up Aramis and Dame Josephine. Then have Draven take Amber to Fiona to try to fix the memories. <br /><br /><br />Dragonfire630 @ LiteroticaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-89067807999264838142011-03-30T13:50:07.011+08:002011-03-30T13:50:07.011+08:00Lol. I'm doomed to put the two threads togethe...Lol. I'm doomed to put the two threads together then. But you guys need to be more concrete though. Would you like to see Amber+Draven instantly together in chapter 9 or would you like me to prolong their suffering? eek! I'm so mean to my characters.ArtFormhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17857732683304260226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-41582570519478873932011-03-30T10:32:59.717+08:002011-03-30T10:32:59.717+08:00yeah add them together to make one fucking great s...yeah add them together to make one fucking great story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-23698044050712822392011-03-30T09:21:54.847+08:002011-03-30T09:21:54.847+08:00Why break the chain, combine the two. Between both...Why break the chain, combine the two. Between both they solve some of the conflicts you introduced and still leaves it open for another series!!Whiteboynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-87951192813722393092011-03-30T03:19:59.259+08:002011-03-30T03:19:59.259+08:00Oh for sure combine both of them! There is a way t...Oh for sure combine both of them! There is a way to intertwine both of them together and would make for a great chapter! <br /><br />reading it I just wante to smack the hell out of Daddy Culzean for that call and making it sound as through he was going to bring harm to Amber but then when he told Draven to take her hand before he changed his mind my fists went straight into the air!<br /><br />Ok can I say that I loved that Pearl was the one person that Al went to to talk about girl problems. That was to funny. He asking what he is suppose to do and then she tells him to get on his knees! That was funny!<br /><br />"nonnie"tommyandcarriejameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13972261462946358587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-85999973453048209662011-03-30T01:41:50.429+08:002011-03-30T01:41:50.429+08:00It's a yes for me! Combine them! OH YES! A ...It's a yes for me! Combine them! OH YES! A matriarch locking heads with Culzean AND Eian . . . You KNOW they know each other!!!! OH MY!!! Let the sparks FLY!!!!SizzlinSishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04109269233202717331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-27435964524817192682011-03-30T01:38:40.362+08:002011-03-30T01:38:40.362+08:00I suppose it is unanimous. Combine!I suppose it is unanimous. Combine!pyxishannnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-30343377637533588702011-03-30T01:35:00.555+08:002011-03-30T01:35:00.555+08:00I agree with all of the above. We get the best of ...I agree with all of the above. We get the best of both worlds going forward.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-15635796940529121012011-03-30T01:03:32.308+08:002011-03-30T01:03:32.308+08:00I agree with the first two, combine the endings bu...I agree with the first two, combine the endings but hint at Josephine and Aramis and focus more on Amber getting her memory back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-44548639555205194872011-03-30T00:24:38.412+08:002011-03-30T00:24:38.412+08:00i agree with Mokkelke combine the two it would m...i agree with Mokkelke combine the two it would make for a very romantic taleDonald Ederhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01893081373419399949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7898098240828761061.post-36966937410193868922011-03-29T21:27:29.391+08:002011-03-29T21:27:29.391+08:00why not combine the two? both way have a very nice...why not combine the two? both way have a very nice turn to them and i'm sure there is a nice twists so you can use bothMokkelke/Tanjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04949621567690199793noreply@blogger.com